constructive criticism || comments

Feedback is welcome no matter the time or place, day or night. Suggestions on the portrayal of the character are welcome and appreciated very much, so long as they have reason. Constructive criticism (whether positive or negative) is taken as well, just so long as it is not a generic comment holding words without meaning. Advice that is found unhelpful will be ignored. This is also a place to plot out threads, if desired.

ALL comments are S C R E E N E D.